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December 4, 2014keii4ii5 Comments on 009
Old art all around today. The paneling is pretty bad here; it doesn’t flow smoothly, and it’s got more talking heads than I would’ve preferred. It shows how much I have improved (drew these panels months ago), though, doesn’t it?

I’m a little worried about how the next strip will be received… ^^;

Heart of KeolChapter 2: False Impressions

5 Comments

MytheeDecember 4, 2014 @ 1:38 AMReply

I actually like this page! It flows very nicely for me as I scroll down and read~ Maybe I’m just less attuned to the art of panelling, ahaha. Also, I enjoy seeing so many characters drawn differently in the first panel. 8D [when artists turn everyone except MCs into grey silhouettes, it completely breaks the immersion, everything is too surreal to be taken seriously. quq]
Now very curious what could possibly get you worried. O: Does the tiger guy appear? DOES HE HAVE FOUR NIPPLES.

…Wait… upon closer inspection of the last panel… how’s Ethan breathing?! D8

keii4iiDecember 5, 2014 @ 3:56 AMReply

Ethan’s nostrils are conveniently exposed. How considerate of the rice, huh? 8D

I don’t mind silhouette people in the background, personally, but they don’t always work so well. Here I’m trying to establish that yes, this is an actual village with people living in it, so silhouette people would not be a good fit!

The tiger guy only has two nipples, alas (the biology of his species is REALLY weird).

MytheeDecember 7, 2014 @ 1:58 AMReply

Ohhh. ouo Considerate vegetables are considerate. Soon, they will be considered ate. Because I will have eaten them. OMNOMNOM RICE

Looking forward to finding out more about the biology of his species! 8D And also the mechanics of plant waifus- I mean, suyori.

d.ForrestDecember 30, 2014 @ 1:10 PMReply

Talking Head pages are a necessity, and sometimes they give a respite for the viewer from action. The page works fine.

BorgSeptember 6, 2022 @ 3:36 PMReply

And as we all know, it’s considered terribly rude to stab visitors with rakes.

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