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April 12, 2015keii4ii5 Comments on 039
Note-chan: “Sempai noticed me at last!”

Was it a little underwhelming? Perhaps the next chapter will make it all better. :)

Heart of KeolChapter 4: The Little Girl and the Cat

5 Comments

hpkomicApril 13, 2015 @ 7:44 PMReply

This is some beautiful artwork. I love the luminescent whispy fish, who I am sure probably have a proper name I have yet to discover. I do have a hard time understanding the rocky outcropping that I think Ethan? is standing on, because the outcropping seems very flat and arch-like, but the angle he is standing at does not necessarily make sense to the structure, unless the rocky outcropping is actually flat with a circle carved out of it. The rocks just feel vertically stacked is all.

Otherwise, lovely page. Intrigued by the concept.

hpkomicApril 13, 2015 @ 7:45 PMReply

How weird, this comment was supposed to show up on the first page of the archive. :(

keii4iiApril 13, 2015 @ 8:56 PMReply

Sorry about that! I think my anti-spam plugin was acting up. I just updated it and posted a test comment (which I have deleted), and it seems to be working fine now.

hpkomicApril 13, 2015 @ 7:54 PMReply

There are some beautiful panels on this page, (http://www.heartofkeol.com/eng/001-01/), but I don’t know if the doll-like features of the man necessarily work to my taste. But that’s just a personal preference. Your more “splashy” panels show some great design ideas.

hpkomicApril 13, 2015 @ 8:00 PMReply

Fantastic lighting on this page, (http://www.heartofkeol.com/eng/001-02/) it really helps set the moods of the two different scenes. I also enjoyed the dramatic burst of wind surrounding the appearance of this little girl.

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